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Tale of the Vanquished
Publication: Leadstart publishing Pages: 500
X-FACTOR: Know ‘Asuras’
from their point of view.
My Rating: 4 out of 5
He is an intellect, brave, strong and a great
dancer. This story tells you the views of ‘Ravana’. And the author has twisted
the original Ramayana to some extent, in order to present the perspective of ‘Asuras’.
So, if you are a hardcore fan of Rama, then you may not like it very much. However,
as a story, writer does justice with its characters.
Yet another story starts in flashback. It seems that today’s
writers like starting stories in flashback. So, the first scene is that ‘Ravana’
is dying, result of the courtesy shown by Rama, and he thinks about his life
and past. The story revolves around ‘Ravana’ and how he collects all the tribes
of Asuras and makes Lanka. Gods are conquering race and they are affected by
cast-culture, gender biases and are arrogance; whereas, Asuras believe in
equality and liberalization.
The Rama is unkind and he is not a believer of giving a
fair chance to everybody. He is someone who could not stand with his own wife
and someone who kills warriors from behind. All these may sound anti-Rama but
eventually all of these are truth. We know him as one who is bound to his duty
and responsibilities towards people but as all of us know that victorious has
always tampered with history. The whole story is almost like Ramayana but the
protagonist and antagonist have been swapped.
The story is however, slow when it comes to battles and guerilla
fights. It could have been edited well but unfortunately it remains less attractive.
The charisma of Ravana has been reduced and many facts have been twisted. Sadness
prevails in the story after the first half and people may get misguided by few
of the negative views in it.
Despite of all the facts, the story is interesting and
pleasant. I urge people, not to take it as anti-Brahmin, anti-Hinduism or
anti-Ramayana. It is a ‘story’ which has been wonderfully written.
The story is very easy to read. Though, not
completely dictionary free but the writer utilized good words and phrases
throughout the tale. As Ramayana has been written and re-written, may be trillion
times, hence people tend to compare the language.
The writer has tried his best to keep up the speed in his
writing, which he does in most of the chapters, but some of the chapters are
really slow and it takes an extra effort to cross them. He has done a very good
effort to curse the caste-system in India, but I think, it could have been more
impactful. I honestly wish that editor of this book could have worked harder to
make it relentless, when it comes to criticizing a system.
The only thing which I can say after reading ‘Asura’ and
analyzing the writing potential of the writer is that, I am definitely going to
read his next.
We may talk about how negative it is and
how the facts of ‘Ramayana’ have been twisted to support the protagonist but
the fact is that it’s a good read. Be rational and broad-minded. We should
think about it as a story, not as a history book.
A common boy who fights his way out to become a king, he
is courageous, bright, visionary, silly, arrogant and at times selfish. He
makes many decisions in his life, few of them are correct and few of them go
wrong. His fiasco is not Ravana’s failure but a common man’s. A common man who
dares to compete with privileged ones.
I am not sure about Rama
but I think we all have a ‘Ravana’ inside us. This book may give a wrong
message to faint believers but for most of us, it is a must read and refreshing.
Book: Oath of vayuputras
Author: Amish Tripathi
Publication: Westland Pages: 565
X-FACTOR: Mythology with a twist.
My Rating: 3.6 out
The immortals of Meluha, The Secrets of the Nagas and now
the third (last) part of a well-received tale of Shiva, known as Oath of
Vayuputras, Amish is having a dream run of his life (perhaps of all 7 lives).
After getting criticized about the sloppy story and editing, Amish have tried
to rectify all the flaws and I am sure that the editor must have worked very
hard on it as well.
If you have not read the first two parts of this book
then I will strongly recommend you to read it first, otherwise, this novel will
be more like a History Book. Shiva- the protagonist starts in this novel as a
hero of all. He discovers that Somras has to be destroyed eventually and seeks
help from other allies and kingdoms. He leads the attack against the fiercest
enemy and meets with many foes and friends in the course of doing it.
The plot of the story has been started from exactly where
it was left in the last novel. The endless secrets which had been introduced in
previous two parts like what is evil, why is it and how it can be stopped, have
been answered and answered very briefly. When compared to last edition, this
one has better language and crisp style. The secrets and twists are well
directed and interesting. It binds the reader to the book and compels to forget
about meals, tea and Facebook for a while. The author twists the actual
mythology for his story and modifies the characters for the sake of making it
more interesting, which overall is good. Usually in the books having more than
500 pages, some sub-stories run along with the main plot, but this novel has
only one and good plot.
On the other hand, too much of explanation and
experiments with the characters may not suit most of the readers. The secrets
have been revealed very early in the story which reduces the interest. Hardcore
followers of Indian mythology may get disappointed and unhappy about the
experiments done with some actual characters of Indian mythology (like Mahadev
and Shiva are two different people in the novel). At some places the book reads
as a History book more than a novel. The climax of the stories is bad (it is a
strong word, I know). It seems that it had been written particularly for the
movie which is based upon this (by Karan Johar and perhaps starred by Hritik).
Overall, it is a nice read with good mixture of Science,
Fiction, Mythology and History. The story is smooth and well written. The
language is not completely grammar-free but still easy to read.
A very crisp and yet descriptive writing has become Amish’s
trademark. It has a touch of history and science. There are not many hiccups in
the story. The author keeps the same style which he opted in last two novels,
which is simple and beautiful.
There are few setbacks and flaws in the story and
writing, like, the reference of Bhagwat Geeta has been taken but the backdrop
of the story is pre-Krishna. When compared to the last two novels and the first
half of this novel, the ending has been hurriedly written. It looks as if
something missing or incomplete. But the overall writing remains new and
After reading first two parts of the story, the
expectations with this one was huge. People rushed to the bookstores to
purchase this one as soon as they came to know about the release.
Unfortunately, like several other sequels, this one as well, is not able to
satisfy the hopes and crashes in no men’s land. Neither good nor bad is
something which comes in my mind. However, apart from miserable ending, the
novel can be used as an answer book for first two novels in this series and
there are instances where a reader can enjoy and cherish the writing. Though,
as Shiva could not cross the line and become god, likewise, Amish remains a
good writer and misses the exceptionally good writer’s spot.
I will recommend this
novel to all who have read the first two parts and all who want to read
something unconventional and want to know more about the history and Mythology
(beware of hypothetical incidents and characters though).
THE STORY: It's like Tolstoy said. Happiness is an allegory,
unhappiness a story. So, it is an allegory here more than a story. This
story is about a bunch of friends who are engineers (also). I don’t know
how many engineers we have in Indian fiction. I guess too many to
count. But as I say, every story has something different. This story is
short, crisp and fast. Nice incidents, embraced by emotions like love,
care, friendship and mischief. Story gives almost equal treatment to all
of its characters. The protagonist, Aryan leads the story through
different incidents and shows how important it is to talk with your own
conscience at times. Aryan represents today’s young generation who is
full of zeal, energy and positivity. Despite of all-corruption status of
our nation, they dare to see dreams of a developed and bright India.
Half of the book reads more like a memoir than a story, but in later
half, it takes the shape of a good tale. It also tells many things about
the corruption in construction sites and gives an idea about the
reasons of delays in government projects. There are no lapses as
such but a few places where the story becomes slow and stretched. I
think leaning about furnaces and other engineering stuffs can test the
patience of a common reader. In the story, engineers are beaten by
contractor’s men but everything settles down without any retaliation.
There are instances where the tricks used by the protagonist is
unrealistic like while trying to remove truck from traffic, convincing
boss for leaves and some other places. The climax is most dramatic,
though it does not happen in real life but still people will enjoy it,
as an allegory. Overall, it is nice story. Flirting and rusty
language usage at some places makes it a fun read before it gets down to
its real business at the end.
THE WRITING: I must say that
it is very well written. The language is easy and dictionary free, it
has the pace required and most importantly apart from a very few places
it compels reader to hold the book right in front of his nose. The
writer describes the incidents quite nicely and in an easy-going manner.
Every page shows lots of potential and talent. After reading the
whole story, it is brutal to mention about the lapses but reviewers are
cruel people. I don’t know whether there is any side lower and side
upper birth in 1st class AC (correct me if there are), this is in
context of the episode where Rehaan meets with Deepa. At a point the
protagonist shows 1000 rupee note to a truck driver and he runs after
him leaving his loaded truck (also, the color of 1000 rupee note is
written green but actually it is red). The names like Rehaan and
Rehanaa, Aryan and Alya give feeling of brother and sister more than
lovers (that’s more what I feel than a lapse). But again, these minor
mistakes have no impact over the story and the writing remains
THE CONCLUSION: I am not sure whether this story
can be placed under humor because there are not many paragraphs which
can induce smile. But it is a brilliantly written story. It gives some
moral messages which are most needed by today’s youth. Moreover, this
book expresses the helplessness of an honest employee in big
construction companies. All becomes well at last but it shows that in
reality, how difficult is for one to adjust in such situations. It is a
nice and less time taking story and would say it will attract the
readers who like to read the novels which are fast, less complicated and
with a happy ending.
THE STORY: A review is easy to write, as easy as your daily journal,
but writing right review is a daunting task. This story is based upon
the struggles of a boy, Sunny, who is living with her ever teasing
mother, a restless father, a sweet sister-in-law (who does nothing but
serves meals, tea etc. basically) and a generous brother. The question
is that why on the earth a common man, who is already rough-casting so
much of setbacks and distress in life, would like to read another
struggle story? The answer is because it gives many lessons to all, like
‘the thing which you love the most may not worth it at all’.
Chameleon has a tight, crispy and short story to tell but it is not at
all fast-track. Sunny is an interior decorator and the whole story sails
on the tides of his emotions and banks upon the incidents and accidents
occurred with him. Prohibiting myself to go into the deep, I would add
hints about the plot. It has good explanations about the places and the
crook ways contractors earn money. The writer has used ‘Hindi’ to
express the feeling at some spots; most of them have come well. The love
scenes are realistic and triggers Goosebumps. As every coin has two
sides, this story has some weaker aspects as well. Characters appear and
disappear on their will (like genie). The flashbacks are used so much
that often a person wonders whether a page or two are missing from the
book. Hindi has been used more than required. Nevertheless, every writer
has his own style and having said that, I would say that a very descent
piece of work and it has a very fascinating climax which justifies the
name of the novel.
THE WRITING: ‘Words creates wonders’. It is
a nicely written book and if you are a regular reader of novels, you
would be impressed by the choice of words and way of explanations on
more than one occasion (That definitely does not mean on 2 occasions). I
would happily place this novel in ‘no dictionary required’ category.
Easy but still such a compiling writing is more like an eye opener for
the people who think that using ‘dictionary English’ lifts the
excellence of their writing. On the other hand, at some places Hindi
has been just translated into English which hampers the rather crispy
language of the story like ‘Had she laughed, the world would have
laughed with her and had she cried….’ One important thing (which I
think is significant to tell), writer starts a flashback and remains in
it for couple of chapters and all of a sudden comes back in present
which obscures the reader. I think (personally) flashbacks must end in
the same chapter. At an incident, Sunny tells that he had sworn never to
ride on a bike, and in the very next scene he is dropped by his friend
on a bike. But indeed these small lapses can be easily overlooked owing
to the excellent writing and dramatic expressions the writer pulls off. A
better story and this writer can do wonders.
The reader would think that ‘why am I reading about Sunny?’ and as soon
as he would finish the question, two words will hit him hard ‘why not?’
Sunny is simple, honest and at times adorable. Immaculate writing style
and spice of real life makes the story a good read. I will recommend it
to people who like to read a good story in 2 or 3 installments. This is
an intense story which has been miraculously simplified.
THE STORY: I would like to make it clear that this story has nothing to
with war, fight, soldiers or even a gun-shot. This story is simple but
yet touches your heart on many occasions. The protagonist is in Army and
this story swings between his present and past. A very few characters
make the story easy-going. Interesting description of a typical Indian
girl is eye-catching and realistic. Some nice poems and songs are
included in the book which can be easily dedicated to one you love.
Congrats to the writer for choosing ornamental words to describe the
characters. The whole book appears like a assembly of pearls. On
the other hand the story is a bit slow and almost stops on a few
occasions. The descriptions of the characters are too long (though
outstanding in the literature point of view) and not all modern readers
would be able to connect well. Including songs and poems was a nice idea
but a poem or song after every (or few) incident makes the story even
slower. In the party scene I was quite amazed by the capacity of the
protagonist to drink that much alcohol and still be normal. Overall,
this book is a classic example of romanticism (छायावाद) and to admire
and understand the instrumental work of words and emotions, a casual
reader is not enough.
THE WRITING: As I mentioned that this
book has been written under the influence of ‘romanticism’ (छायावाद) and
there are not many places which can be mentioned as a writing lapse. It
is outstanding piece of work. The taste of the modern readers has
change and people need more spice in a romantic book but still it is the
most beautifully written book. The hard work of writer is quite visible
in the form of artistic words and exceptional style. There is
nothing negative about the writing but it is the ability/understanding
of reader which may become a challenge for the writer. May be if the
style of writing could be tailored to match the frequency of Indian
readers (most) then it can be remarkably well and enriching.
THE CONCLUSION: The story is very simple and becomes predictable after a
few chapters. In fact, I felt that the story has been taken over by the
writing style of the author. The story was suppressed somewhere, and
writing elegance was prominent. Having said that, if you are a true
lover of English literature and romanticism then this book is for you.
Read it to venerate the words, descriptions, explanations and
positioning of sentences.
Book: Nayak Brothers: The valentine’s day clue Author: Rupali Rajopadhye Rotti Genre: Fiction/Thriller Publication: Leadstart publishing/ frog books Pages: 237 X-factor: Super easy language My rating: 3 out of 5
The Story: I must say that writing a thriller is not easy. Besides
collecting and joining all links, one has to make it interesting and
fast track. The book starts well with the disappearance of Akash, which
lets the alarms go crazy in his family, then among friends, and then
slowly everybody is involved. The whole story mainly revolves around a
bunch of boys who poke their nose everywhere to find Akash and
accidentally reveal a few more secrets in the course. It makes me
remember a daily soap starring Swapnil Joshi on Doordarshan (don’t
remember the name though) in which he and a group of kids are NANHE
JASOOS. In a thriller, it is important how you connect people
with the story and the writer has done it well. The story is simple and
clean. The first few chapters maneuver interest in the reader, which
compels to read further. Easy language makes reading brisk and helps to
connect with the story. Just before the middle of the book, story
becomes predictable and lack of thrills (apart from a very few) makes
reading slow. I would strongly say that it is an adventure story more
than a thriller. But the climax has some nice twists which are worth
reading. Goons, guns, smuggling, theft, abduction, betrayal,
police…everything is here.
The Writing: As I mentioned, writing
thriller is not that easy compared to few genres. The writer does well
in order to keep the things together. All the points have been connected
well and there is no writing lapse like forgetting about something or a
character. The writer has done a fair work while showing the affection
between brothers and friends. On one hand, easy language made it
easy-going but on the other hand writer has not been able to thrill the
reader. Many different episodes make one to get lost from the actual
chase for Akash. The title of the chapters could have been better
because if one reads the chapter’s name, he would more or less know the
story. I recommend more mystic names for a thriller book. I think writer
can include more secrecy while writing a thriller. But having said
that, writing is uncomplicated and neat, it certainly attracts teen
The Conclusion: The story is simple and
easy-going. As I mentioned I would say it an adventure story instead of a
thriller. Language suits teenagers and grown-ups who like to read easy
English. After first few chapters, it is hard for a reader to keep up
the focus, unless he really concerns about Akash. I recommend this book
to those who like reading adventure, like to read English novel without
dictionary and likes teen-books.